tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7324546173362923571.post1575512444497143569..comments2023-10-25T08:56:45.750-07:00Comments on liberté, égalité, trivialité: Congress Shall Make No Law, a play in one actPatrickhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00816959400474038457noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7324546173362923571.post-2234701541876761212008-12-15T17:16:00.000-08:002008-12-15T17:16:00.000-08:00Nice.Nice.Michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06723403407561641772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7324546173362923571.post-74162957759636264312008-12-15T16:00:00.000-08:002008-12-15T16:00:00.000-08:00I think you should change the title. It lets the r...I think you should change the title. It lets the reader know exactly what is going to go on through the entire play. As soon as you see the title you think, "Oh, I get it, okay." and then you move on. <BR/><BR/>Change the title so the reader doesn't know what to expect. A play full of cleverness is more valuable than a play that depends on the cleverness of its title.<BR/><BR/>Just some advice from a fellow playwrite.<BR/><BR/>NS<BR/>http://sciencedefeated.wordpress.com/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com